Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Lucy Dalglish, executive director, Reporters Committee for Freedom of the Press

I hope many of you caught what Lucy had to say Tuesday night about the use of anonymous sources, a topic we have visited in class.

She said she would never say we don't use too many. Anonymity is always an easy fallback way to get someone to talk to us about uncomfortable issue and blame.

But, she is clearly not among those editors who have outright banned used of unnamed sources. Without them, she said, the public is not going to hear the truth about such matters as intelligence mistakes, back-room budgeting and military matters. There is a place for this journalistic tool.

The difficult part is to determine if there really is no other way to get information from other sources, multiple sources or documents than to put it in the mouth of a person with a hidden identity.

Lucy Dalglish on anonymous sources

I hope many of you captured what the executive director of the Reporters Committee for Freedom of the Press had to say about use of anonymous sources Tuesday night. We have debated this a bit in class. She would not ever stand up and try to say we don't use too many anonymous sources, she said, first.





Indeed, it's too easy to grant annonymity to people to get them to loosen up and talk.

Modern day IF Stone?

Check out this article -- with video -- about a producer on Jon Stewart's Comedy Central show whose stock in trade is comparing what officials and pundits are saying now with what they have said in the past.

The Post has dubbed this investigative humor because it involves digging up stuff out of the past and because it's frequently funny to see the twists and hypocritical turns officials take.

Stewart uses all this to excellent comedic effect but it's not an insignificant past time. Legendary investigative reporter IF Stone was a rigorous watchdog of government through much the same technique. He read government reports. He looked at minutes of meetings, He compared what officials said through a multitude of speeches and they he charted the changes and discrepancies. This is all on-the-record stuff, no anonymous sources, no leaks. He just paid attention and read widely.

Get the lesson in that?

www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article2008/04/29/AR2008042902827/html

Tuesday, April 29, 2008

A photographer's interviewing trick

Philippe Halsman was a great portrait photographer for Life magazine (Remember Bruce Squiers' speech?) who shot many celebrities and stars in his day from Marilyn Monroe to Richard Nixon.

There is a link between photographing and interviewing people. Fashion photographer Richard Avedon spoke about how he was given permission to bore into people when they let him shoot them. Nothing is out of bounds. That's a good way to think about questioning people. The trick for photographer and for reporter is to get your subject to let down barriers and fear so that you can really "see" more.

Halsman's technique for doing this was to get his subjects to jump.

Just jump.

And oddly enough they did, including society dames and royalty. It was so unexpected and silly, and seemingly non-threatening that his subjects did as he asked. There is a book of Halsman's jumping picture but that was not the point. What he did in shooting those jumps was loosen up his subjects and get closer to them.

Monday, April 28, 2008

Nice meeting coverage

Some nice work on the meeting assignment.

I commend these for you to check out because they are meeting stories, rather than stories about covering a meeting; they are limited to what the reporters thought was the most important items on the agenda,  rather than reports on the entire agenda; and there are some nice touches of colorful reporting, description and quotes:

 Anand (http://anandbalasar.blogspot.com)

Aimee (http://aimeeHx3.blogspot.com)

Bridget (www.bridgetjoy.blogspot.com)

Sam (http://samh-jrl2008.blogspot.com)


Friday, April 25, 2008

A scheduling change

I apologize for another abrupt change in scheduling but it's necessary to accommodate a speaker.

Originally I had told you we would meet Monday and then Tuesday night you will attend the Lucy Dalglish speech in lieu of class on Wednesday.

But Steve Gourds who is going to talk to you about digging up information on people and places using public records can only meet with us on Wednesday, April 30. So, I am rescheduling that class and I will give you the follow Monday May 5 off instead. 

You may well need this -- Your final papers are due to me May 7.

Let me go over the rundown of work owed between now and the end of the semester.

If you have turned in everything to date in on time, you will owe me:

1. The final story
2. A blog item about Lucy Dalglish, the Tuesday April 29 speaker.
3. A blog item on what finally you have discovered about the person who's name you were assigned toward the start of class.
4. A blog item explaining what Swift Boating is
5. Rewrites of any stories handed in on time that you want a chance at redoing.

As always, call, email or let me know if you have questions or problems.


Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Swift Boating


Jo-Ann Armao talked a lot about the Swift Boat campaign against John Kerry in the 2004 Presidential Election. This was an example, she said, of how journalists striving for a kind of fake balance did a poor job representing reality to readers. 

The quizzes on the notes you took today reveal that none of you know what the Swift Boat campaign was.

Yet, no one asked the speaker to explain.

So, now please look it up and write a one-paragraph explanation because I am asking.  Thank you.

How to take better pictures

Taken as a group, the photos you turned in for our last class had these common problems:

1. They were blurry, grainy or otherwise technically lacking. Digital cameras far surpass cell phones, although I did allow both. The library lets you check out digital cameras. Try one or experiment with the one you have.

2. They were shot from too far away. The closer you are to your subject matter the more dramatic and effective the shot is likely to be. If you can't get close, use a telephoto lens or try to figure out how you might get a different shot that emphasizes some other angle of the story. This is superior to sticking with your original idea anyway and getting a lousy photo.

3. They showed "things" or "places" but no people. We humans like photos with life forms in them, preferably fellow humans, preferably pictures close enough to see their eyes. The one exception in this class was Bridget's shot of one of the routers destroyed by vandals on campus and the subject of a front-page ASP story Tuesday.

Check out this illustrated FotoFinish guide on "How to Take Better Pictures." http://www.fotofinish.com/resources/centers/photo/takingpictures.htm

The good news is -- NO CLASS on WEDNESDAY

I would like you all to go to hear a leading national expert on First Amendment and press law issues.

Lucy Dalglish, the executive director of The Reporters Committee for Freedom of the Press, will be speaking at 7 p.m. Tuesday, April 29, in the Standish Board Room, which is on the Third Floor of he Science Library.

Please plan to attend and to write a 250-500 word news article on her address in your blogs by the end of the day Friday, May 2. If you choose to tell the story in an alternative form -- through pictures or audio -- that will be acceptable.

If you have any questions, please let me know.

Friday, April 18, 2008

Journalism lessons in bite-sized chunks

Ted Pease calls himself a professor of interesting stuff. He runs a website at http://tesdword.blogspot.com or you can sign up to get a once-a-day posting about journalism/writing/civics. Send a note to ted.pease@gmail.com

I find these, well, interesting as he says, but they sometimes lead me to other issues and names I want to know more about. At any rate it's a way to learn more without a huge investment of time you don't have.

Today's offering, for example is Timidity:

"Without newspapers, without someone telling us what is happening, all kinds of mischief can occur. It can be pretty serious, such as corporate and government corruption. Of course, unless newspapers really dig for stories, we won't be able to root out shady goings-on. And today, many newspapers seem tame and timid, far from the old newspaperman's challenge to 'comfort the afflicted and afflict the comfortable.'"  A quote from Bangor Maine Daily News columnist Steve Cartwright, 2008

The "old newspaperman" quoted in the quote is Joseph Pulitzer. Look up Pulitzer's platform. It's not really a piece of flooring but a statement about the role of journalists. Pretty inspiring stuff.

Thursday, April 17, 2008

Where'd all the men go?

Speakers and several of you have commented about the overwhelming number of women in the class compared to men.

Essayist Nancy Gibbs in Time magazine 4/14 writes that 58 percent of undergraduates nationally are female right now. In a few years the ratio will probably tip to 60/40. Black men are outnumbered on campus by black females 2 to 1.

The essay was not as strong on reasons as it was on numbers.

As to journalism, New Media Women Entrepreneurs, a project of the McCormick Tribune
Foundation (all that by way of letting you as readers know the numbes look credible):

Women make up two-thirds of all J-School students -- but only one-third of the full-time journalism workforce.

Also:

only 15 percent of executive leaders and 12 percent of board members in top communications companies

just 40 percent of the TV news workforce and 25 percent of TV news directors

and only 14 percent of Sunday morning TV talk show guests.

Stop the Presses!! Most students believe they deserve A's

Here's an analysis of the editorials you did on the grade you feel you deserve:

Of 18 students:

* 7 wrote that they deserved A's.
*5 wrote that they deserved A-'s
*1 wrote he/she deserved a B
*5 did not do the assignment (not good!)


The techniques used to persuade included:

1. Flattery as in: "I've truly enjoyed this class and I am so happy I discovered journalism."

2. Honesty as in: "I know I have slacked off quite a bit at times, but I try my best to get myself back on track."

3. Mild coercion as in: "If I received lower than an A- in this class I will be very disappointed both in myself and the professor."

4. Favorable self-assessment as in "Although far from achieving the level of journalist, I have been surprised by myself as this is my first journalism class, and (I) already feel leaps and bounds ahead of w(h)ere I was before this semester started."

5. Empathy as in: "It must be hard for a teacher to decide what grades a student should get."

Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Bruce Squiers does your photo assignment


Daily Gazette shooter Bruce Squiers knows the assignment you are all working on -- to shoot a news photograph on campus over the next two days. He sent along a shot done recently showing how he might have responded to this assignment. Here's the note he sent about this picture:

"Attached is a fairly recent photo of a U of Albany shot I made, a basketball game.
Remember how I told the class that good photos usually have an "unusual" moment? This one has a player on his back on the floor, appearing like he might get stomped. (He wasn't)."

Those of you looking for Broadcast Experience....

A notice from Journalism Program Director Bill Rainbolt:

HotNewz.tv is a Web television news service aimed at a predominantly college-age audience -- with well-experienced broadcast journalism professionals on the senior staff, and with college correspondents from around the country providing much of the on-air content.

HotNewz.tv wants UAlbany students to get involved as broadcast journalism correspondents (they will be the first from the SUNY system). The HotNewz.tv people say they are looking for "any story that will be of interest to college students across the country . . . news, sports, politics, interesting profiles, commentary, music videos, whatever."

One of the anchors of HotNewz.tv and the CEO will present information about the service and would like to talk with UAlbany students who are interested in submitting footage and stories. This would be a great opportunity to get experience and materials for a resume.

The main studio is in New York studio, but the local correspondents would be based here, in the Capital District.

When: 2:45-3:45 Thursday, April 17
Where: Humanities 354
Who: One anchor and the CEO of HotNewz.tv

Note to the class from speaker Jo-Ann Armao

Rosemary:
Thank you for the invite to the class. I always find it interesting to hear
the questions and concerns of a different generation. In thinking about my
presentation, I fear I might have given short shrift to the writing part of
editorials. It goes without saying that it is the writing where everything
comes together and that often is the toughest part.

It's important that the writer really know what it is he or she wants to say.
There can be no throat-clearing. Some find it useful to write a headline
first. That really focuses your thinking. The lead, just as in straight
reporting, is the hardest to write. It has to be forceful and state clearly
what the whole piece is about. The second graph is generally considered the
background section. When providing background, the writer should also not
be afraid to infuse opinion.

The rest of the piece is arguments to buttress the lead. Unlike news
stories, it is important to have a kicker that sums up and makes a final
statement.

One final word: be careful with adjectives. They can be powerful friends
but some, like shameful, are overrused and trite.

Cheers
Jo-Ann

Tuesday, April 15, 2008

To Name or Not to Name

Classmate Hope Still got a great quote from a student she was interviewing recently for the Fountain Day assignment. The only trouble was, the student didn't want his name used. To be identified with his words would identify him as an underage drinker.

So should the quote have been used or not?

Anonymous Sources
What is a name? While yes, when a name is not on paper, it's a means of addressing someone, of giving their identity and being a word to call. But on paper, in an article where the person is not the main focus, but the words they say contribute to the point being made, what does it matter? If something they say does in fact deem itself important enough to be attributed to a person by name, they by all means the journalist should use wise discretion and include the name; but if a quote just adds flavor to the story, and the speaker would rather not be named, then I see no harm in not including it.

As for an editors demand for a source that will allow his or her name to be used, perhaps a speaker might not be as candid if he or she knows that their words will be attributed. Illegal activity or unsavory behavior is most certainly not something a person would want associated with their name. But if that information helps along a story, then it seems ridiculous to rule out useful information for the sole reason that the speaker does not want to be named. This is most especially true if the alternative is a nameable source with inferior comments.

Even some of the most intriguing and influential stories have involved anonymity; does the name Deep Throat ring a bell?
It seems quite evident that journalists must use their discretion when deciding if appropriate to include an anonymous source. While editors ultimately have control, it seems they should be willing to lose a "Bob" or "Sally" for decent information.
Posted by hope123 at 6:12 PM 0 comments

UAlbany journalism students as they....

listen actively and devise clever questions to elicit the best information from class speakers. Right?





Add photos to your blogs to attract attention -- and learn a new skill.


Like this:

Washington Post editorial writer Jo-Ann Armao talks to UAlbany reporting class Monday, April 14.

Monday, April 14, 2008

Some common errors in the Fountain Day/Tulip Festival stories we can all learn from

1. Use only two verbs to describe people talking: SAID or SAY. Any other word will be colored by a little nuance you don't want in your story.

Where SAID or SAY is neutral and plain, CLAIM indicates the person speaker is lying or that you think they may be lying. As in "Hillary Clinton claims to have seen snipers in Bosnia."

STATE or AVER means the speaker spoke forcefully or with feelings, and if they just SAID something that is an inaccuracy.

You cannot really "laugh" words, although that is something I see in copy all the time.

2. Leads are not opening paragraphs in an English paper. If you pose a question, use a quote or write more than three lines, I am giving the lead back to you for reworking. Try to summarize or illustrate the main idea of your story in that first SHORT sentence.

3. You as reporter and the reader as audience are not really buddies. Keep some distance. Don't talk about "our school" or "our country" or "the war we are waging." Your interest in reporting is getting at all sides and possibilities of the truth, not, like the reader who is allowed to have a "side" he's pulling for.

4. Please try in writing journalism not to give your editor -- professor -- what you think she wants to hear. The many stories about Fountain Day that came in claiming that it's as much fun now that things are tamed down and "safe" just do not ring true. Sean Bailey scored the best and most real quote from one of his sources who said. "My freshman year things were so much better. They made it so overly obvious it was organized by some geeks and the school. It went from a college party to a corny kiddy festival with a castle bounce."

5. You cannot do journalism without talking to people and using their voices. If you did a lot of research and wrote the most authoritative report in university history, it's still a report and not a STORY. These efforts got an F.

A new news source from Amanda Baskind

Your classmate Amanda found an interesting source of information which resulted in a Fountain Day story different from and more detailed than others in the class. I asked her to blog about it so we could share the information with you:


When I was given the assignment to write an article about some aspect of the University at Albany’s Fountain Day, I knew exactly what I wanted to write about; the history of Fountain Day. In the past, many alumni have told me that the most infamous of the Fountain Days occurred in 2004. Fountain Day 2004 was characterized by mischief and mayhem, giving the university a terrible reputation as well as driving it to the top of Princeton Review’s list of top party schools in the nation. Thus, I decided that for my news story, I would focus on the problems of Fountain Day 2004 as well as the changes that occurred as a result to Fountain Day 2005.
Where to start? I began my research online. I looked at articles featured on the university website, articles published in the Times Union, and any other piece of information that I was able to dig up on Google. I became frustrated when I realized that my classmates were also writing about Fountain Day and were conducting their research the same way I was. If I continued doing the research the way I had been, my story would have been virtually identical to the stories that my peers were writing.
Then I remembered that my boyfriend had once told me about a university historian. When I asked him about it, he said that he used the historian four years ago, when he was a freshman, writing a research paper about the history of Greek Life at the SUNY Albany. He told me that the historian was located on the third floor of the Science Library.
The next day, I found myself wandering around the third floor of the science library. I came across a room and entered. I soon learned that the university historian was on a “sabbatical.” However, I was going to be able to dig through the university archives with the help of a woman who works in the archives office.
I put my backpack in a locker and entered the completely silent room. The woman and I decided that the best place to look for information about the history of Fountain Day was in old issues of the Albany Student Press, or the “ASP.” Since my previous research showed that Fountain Day was originated in 1978 by two students, I looked in the 1978 April and May issues of the ASP and came up with nothing. I proceeded to look in the 1979 April and May issues of the ASP, and once again, came up with nothing. I continued this process until I reached an article about Fountain Day in the 1982 April ASP. Since my story was to focus on Fountain Days 2004 and 2005, I pulled out the Fountain Day articles in the 2004 and 2005 ASPS. TO gain a better understanding of Fountain Day, I also looked at the Fountain Day articles featured in the 2003, 2006, and 2007 issues of the ASPS. Needless to say, I left with more information than I thought I would. I was especially happy because I uncovered a lot of information that could not be found doing a Google search.
I think that the university historian and archives is a gem. While it is hidden on the top floor of the science library, and quite frankly, is difficult to locate, it is a very helpful place to find information about the history of the university.

Friday, April 11, 2008

A collection of great news photos local and national we will talk about in class
















Photos by Bruce Squiers






What's in store in the week ahead

Jo-Ann Armao, Washington Post


Bruce Squiers, The Daily Gazette, Schenectady


We will have two speakers coming in next week. Please try to make it to class. My admonitions and threats of lowered grades seem not to have helped, but you are adults, so make your own decisions.

I hope you will come and be prepared with lots of questions, good, bad, personal, impertinent, probing, weird. There are no stupid questions.

Monday we will hear from Jo-Ann Armao, a Washington Post editorial writer. She was for nine years the assistant managing editor for local news at the Post, the highest news position ever held there by a woman. OK, not counting Katharine Graham, the legendary publisher during the Watergate years.

She will be talking about editorial writing and how it differs from news writing. You will be given an assignment to blog about after this. It will be due by end of day Wednesday.

Wednesday, our speaker with be a senior photographer from The Daily Gazette in Schenectady, Bruce Squiers. And again after this class, you'll get an assignment to post to your blogs no later than end of day Friday.

Opportunity that may interest some of you

Sent: Friday, April 11, 2008 6:11 PM
To: C2008
Cc: C2008
Subject: FW: Campaign 2008: Leadership in Communication Program



Dear Colleagues:

I am writing to those interested in political communication about a
program that The Washington Center for Internships and Academic Seminars
is sponsoring in conjunction with the Democratic and Republican national
conventions this summer. It is a three-week program that will involve
students in journalism and communication to engage in fieldwork
assignments with the media at both conventions. We have about 10 spaces
left in the program, so I would appreciate your passing on the
information to advanced students in the field-- undergraduate, graduate
or forthcoming May or August graduates. This is an exceptional
opportunity because the conventions are rarely held back-to-back as
there are this year.

Students spend two weeks in Denver and then head directly to
Minneapolis-St. Paul for the Republican convention.

For more information, please direct your students to:
http://www.twc.edu/faculty

The online application is at http://www.campaign2008.info
. Students should select the Leadership
in Communication program option when applying.


Thank you for passing along this information.

Sincerely,
Gene Alpert

=======================================
Eugene J. Alpert, Ph.D.
Senior Vice President
The Washington Center
for Internships and Academic Seminars
1333 16th St. NW
Washington, DC 20036
Http://www.twc.edu
New! Campaign 2008 Website and Application:
http://www.campaign2008.info
email: genea@twc.edu
Toll Free Phone: 1.800.486.8921
Main Phone:: 1.202.238.7900
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Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Pulitzer Prizes

The Washington Post piece we talked about in which violinist Joshua Bell played to an unappreciative Metro system of commuters won a Pulitzer Prize for feature reporting this week.

And Bob Dylan whose poetic lyrics can teach all kinds of writers won a special honorary Pulitzer this year for his contribution to music and American culture.

To see all the winners -- and read some of the best reporting and writing in the world of journalism -- check out: www.pulitzer.org

Monday, April 7, 2008

Covering a Meeting

Your assignment is to cover and to write a story about one of these meetings in the city of Albany or towns of Colonie and Guilderland.

Your story should be at least two pages long and it is due by midnight the DAY AFTER the meeting you choose to attend. Thus, the last assignment should be in to me no later than April 25.



4/7/2008
Common Council Meeting
The Albany Common Council represents the residents of the City of Albany as the legislative body responsible for setting the governing policies of New York State’s Capital city.

4/9/2008
Board of Zoning Appeals Meeting
The Board meets twice monthly to consider applications for variances to the zoning regulations, special use and parking.
...
4/9/2008
Albany Housing Authority Meeting
The Albany Housing Authority provides housing accommodations for persons of low income.

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4/16/2008
Historic Resources Commission Meeting
The Historic Resources Commission reviews and makes recommendations regarding new construction, alterations and demolitions.

4/21/2008
Common Council Meeting
The Albany Common Council represents the residents of the City of Albany as the legislative body responsible for setting the governing policies of New York State’s Capital city.

4/23/2008
Board of Zoning Appeals Meeting
The Board meets twice monthly to consider applications for variances to the zoning regulations, special use and parking.

4/24/2008
Planning Board Meeting
The purpose of the Planning Board is to approve the subdivision of City of Albany property and to review site plans for landscaping, parking and drainage before large-scale projects are constructed.


or
Colonie Town Board April 10 and 24

or
Guilderland Town Board April 15

A journalism professor complains about students -- do you have an answer back for him??

http://chronicle.com/temp/email2.php?id=9WdWMfPrdR9HJDmcJcW5pMkf4bvmpvgp

Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Three children killed by their father in Baltimore

Here is the story as it has developed after a couple of days as reporters have had time to track down records and more sources.

Please read this story from the Baltimore Sun and another from the = Washington Post and be prepared to discuss them in class Wednesday:

http://www.baltimoresun.com/news/local/baltimore_city/bal-castillo0401,0,6527538.story

http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2008/04/01/AR2008040101063.html